Yes, I like this article. The author uses irony and other rhetorical devices to express love for gardening. At the end of the article, I know the author wrote it in cold December, but we all know that plants don't grow well in cold winters. This is not a good season for planting, but the author expresses his desire to plant. It's enough to make the reader feel the author's love of gardening. This also reflects the author's literary talent.
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Unit 3 Unit Discussion
After analyzing the text by the teacher, how do you like the essay? Can you give any examples of writing that shows the author's literary talent? Explain your opinions.
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I think this article is well written. After understanding the meaning of this article, I found that the author and Mr. Ye Shengtao have similarities in their writing methods and habits. As the author mentioned several times in the article that he doesn't like growing vegetables, but he has persisted for more than thirty years, we value that we can find the author's true thoughts in the details.
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The author tells us how to derive unique pleasure from this activity. He also enjoyed the unusual challenge of "conflict" and the satisfaction of being able to improve and "get it just right this time". He talks about a parent's instinct in gardening and the joy of seeing plants grow healthily and successfully protect them;. He also mentions the moral significance, how gardening is a constant reminder of the fragile and easily damaged earth, and how the healthy growth, order and vibrant life in the garden reflects "a similar movement of the gardener's own spirit.". The author uses a lot of irony and wants to suppress it. Such as "I'd much rather eat something juicy and fat. Like hot dogs". It brings a sense of humor and self-deprecation.
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I like this article because in this article, through irony and symbolism, my garden planting was full of planning at the beginning, but in June and July, the garden became chaotic. Compared with the wife's love for the vegetables in the garden, the husband's love is just out of human nature, and he feels uncomfortable looking at the bare fence in April.
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I like this essay.This article uses irony to reflect the author‘s literary talent.From the beginning of the author's dislike of gardening, to the continuous narrative of the article, it shows the author's love for gardening. At the same time, using the symbolic method, the arrival of spring is also the author's expectation and yearning for the future life. The anthropomorphic and exaggerated method is used for vegetables, which makes the whole article more vivid and interesting to the author's narrative.
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I think this article is very good. It is an argumentative essay. The author begins by asking questions, which can attract readers' interest in reading. Then the author explains to us the reasons for planting vegetable gardens and the benefits we can get. The language of this article is beautiful, the content is from simple to deep, and a lot of rhetorical devices are used.
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I think this article is well written. At the beginning of the article, the author expressed his point of view: I don't like planting, and I think it's a tiring job, but the author's later description is the opposite. It can be seen that the author uses a desire to write first. Such a writing technique can attract readers' interest in reading, and at the same time, it can also arouse readers to think, so that readers can think in the context of the author: What can planting bring to people? Do you like to grow?
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In my opinion, the author has great literary talent because the author's attitude changes in the whole article is very logical and the language is humorous, which is of great reading value. And his idea for the whole article is really nice. The opening paragraph of the article is very attractive to the reader, clearly the topic is the rite of spring, why in the first paragraph of the article says that he hates vegetables and gardening. Therefore, this article has the desire to let people find out. Then we can see the author's attitude towards gardening has changed. The author introduces the fun, contradiction and morality of gardening in a logical way. Unique pleasure is from gardening The author enjoys the unusual challenge of conflict.The joy of seeing the healthy growth of plants and the success in their protection.The moral significance is that how gardening keeps reminding people of the delicate and easily ruined earth and how the healthy growth. The author also uses his own experience to demonstrate the many benefits of gardening. In the end, the author expressed the hope for spring and made people feel relaxed and happy.
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I think this article full text language smooth, stretch freely, natural free and easy, can be called a more successful work. The language is very accurate and vivid, the emotions are rich and real, and it is a pleasure to read. Arouse readers' interest in reading. The structure of the article is simple and reasonable, clear and easy for readers to understand the article. The language is lively, and the lines reveal the author's love of growing vegetables. Full text rhythm bright, fresh language, always filled with humor and wit, to read a lot of fun. The tone of the article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and interesting to read. The author is clever in conception, good at selecting points and developing, and the writing is ups and downs and interesting. The author begins by saying that he doesn't like growing vegetables. He prefers hot dogs to growing vegetables. At the beginning, the reader's interest is aroused, and one can refrain from reading further. In the following, through his description, we know that the author actually likes to grow vegetables, and the plot is full of ups and downs, which makes it more interesting to read.
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After the analysis, I can feel the author's literal talent and I think I like this essay. There are many far-reaching meanings in this eaasy. For example, rufusing juicy and fat hot dogs but choosing vegetables means succumning to tempetation. We also konw that the process of cultivation requires mental and physical effect. It can build our character, discipline, perseverance and so on meanwhile. In this eaasy, the author indicated that gardening has a long history since the first people was an gardener.
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I like this article,because this is an article full of literary heritage.The author seems to be criticizing, but in reality, he is showing off his garden to the readers to express his strong love. The author employs various rhetorical devices such as exaggeration and personification to make the entire article lively and interesting, which can better attract readers' attention. At the same time, this kind of writing technique that emphasizes the author's superb writing skills is more prominent. The author's language is humorous and witty, and multiple details express the author's love for it.
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My love for this article is a process. At first, I couldn't understand what the author's idea was after all. Later, through continuous analysis, the author liked gardening. In the beginning, the author said that if hot dogs could be grown, it would be a very good thing. The writer here was very humorous. Later, he slowly approached his real idea by giving examples. I saw that in the end, there was a feeling of seeing the sun. This feeling of exploring emotions in the text would be great.
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It's very interesting and engaging. I like the way it is written. The article is full of humorous sentences, such as "like earth-as-air" and "like hot dogs", making the reading of the article enjoyable and interesting. Also, the author made detailed and vivid depictions of the spring atmosphere, soil, plants, etc., such as "a scent wafts through the window, something like earth-as-air", allowing readers to feel the charm of the garden. "However, by July, you once again encounter the disarray of unthinned carrots, lettuce, and beets. This is when my wife becomes - openly now - the mistress of the garden. A consumer of vast quantities of vegetables, she undertakes the thinning and hand-cultivation of the tiny plants. Squatting, she patiently moves down each row, selecting which plants shall live and which she will discard." Here, the description of the wife's role in gardening and the specific actions she takes not only emphasizes the moral aspect of gardening but also provides a detailed picture of the activity and the characters involved. The garden is not just a physical place, but also symbolizes life, hope, and effort.
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Of course I like this article because of the author’s great writing skills.The author uses a way called “Compliment after criticism”.He doesn’t know why so many people like gardening in the first paragraph and then use a lot of words to express how he loves gardening.What’s more,the author’s language is very humourous.He says “And the sun means business,suddenly,and has a different,deeper yellow in its beams on the carpet” in the second paragraph.The author makes the sun like a person and it mskes me feel hurmous.So,I like this passage.
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I like this essay very much. In this article, the author uses the technique of trying to impress oneself. At the beginning, we may think that the author does not like vegetable gardens, but after reading the author's writing, we will find his love for vegetable gardens in his beautiful words. Later, the author introduces his wife's mother's unique insights on vegetable management in a humorous tone. Perhaps we can find that the author's emotion towards the vegetable garden is just like that of parents towards their children. At the end, the author frankly admits that he really likes to take care of his own vegetable garden.
One of the characteristics of prose is the beautiful language, the whole article after reading, we will feel like spring breeze, as if reading can smell the fresh air, so I really like this essay
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I love this article. This article is humorous in style and beautifully written, which shows the author's literary talent well. The author adopts the method of first suppressing and then raising in the whole article. At the beginning of the article, the author says that he does not understand why so many people like gardening, but then reads between the lines to show that he also likes gardening. This writing method can arouse readers' thinking about the author's attitude towards gardening and stimulate readers' interest in reading. Also, a large number of rhetorical devices used by the author in the article. "Also,your paternal or maternal instincts come into play because helpless living things are depending on you,require training and encouragement and protection from enemies." This phrase uses anthropomorphic rhetoric to personify plants, describing them as the children of gardeners. It vividly depicts the friendly relationship between gardeners and plants.
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I think the prose is beautifully and vividly written. First of all, starting from the title, he expressed the act of planting a small piece of land with a ritual, showing his importance to this matter. Then in the article, the author not only used a lot of writing to describe the beautiful scenery, but also added a lot of description of his own state of mind. For example, in the second paragraph of the article, the author uses several adverbs to express the good mood brought by the vibrant scenery after waking up every morning. In the ninth paragraph of the article, the author describes the garden as shining at seven in the morning. These beautiful words and phrases give the reader an excellent sense of reading.
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I like this article. Its language is profound and humorous at the same time, which makes me interested in reading it again and again. First of all, the title of this article is not as straightforward as the article of the same genre, it expresses the sacrifice of spring, giving people a solemn feeling. In content, for example, the sentence "The birds began screaming hysterically, thinking what I am thinking-the worms are deliciously worming their way through the melting soil." in the second paragraph uses anthropomorphic rhetoric. The author vividly shows that the smell of vegetables and soil after planting ia as exciting as a bird perceiving the moment of worms. The sentence "Which is why Adam was a gardener." in the tenth paragraph mentions Adam's story. It not only reflects the author's humor, but also suggests that we have a long history of gardening, satirizing people who give in to temptation, and pointing out that gardening requires both physical and mental effort to build character discipline and perseverance.
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I like this article, and I think it is very interesting.The author first said that he didn't like the garden, but the later content showed that he liked the garden.This stimulates readers' interest in reading.There are also some articles that write beans and cucumbers as human beings, which is vivid and interesting. I feel that the author also likes to use anthropomorphism in the articles I learned when I was a child, and my own writing will do the same.“The sun means bussiness,suddenly,and has a different,deeper yellow in its beams on the carpet."I like this sentence best.
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Yes, I like this essay.First of all, the title of this article is very poetic. In the article,the author does not directly point out the change of his emotional attitude towards planting, which gives the reader more space to think. His articles are also very humorous, such as his mother-in-law is a botanist.
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I think the essay is a fantastic literary work. The author uses a lot of metaphors and symbols in the article, such as "There are few sights quite as beautiful as a vegetable garden glistening in the sun, all dewy and glittering with a dozen shades of green at seven in the morning. Far lovelier, in fact, than rows of hot dogs." Here, the author uses the "vegetable garden" to symbolize the beauty and vitality of nature, and uses the "hot dogs" to symbolize the mundane and mundane things in life.Through this comparison, the author expresses his love and longing for nature.
In general, this article is full of wit and wisdom, and at the same time, it also contains the author's profound
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The author begins with the question of why he had to dig up a piece of land to plant vegetables when he bought a house 36 years ago. The author tells about the feelings that nature brings to the author, and explains the reasons why he grows vegetables from a simple point of view:It also points out that vegetables are related to human spiritual activities and character formation, and reveals the inseparable connection between man and nature. At the end of the article, the author concludes that gardening can make people feel hopeful about the future.
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I like this article, the author uses a lot of literary techniques, such as personification, irony, etc., to paint a picture of a spring full of vitality and hope.
For example, in the second paragraph of the article, the author uses anthropomorphic techniques to depict the revival of all things in spring, the scene of birds chirping, showing the unique charm of spring.
For example, at the beginning of the article, he said that he couldn't understand why he had to spend his energy to cultivate a garden, which gave me the feeling that he didn't like gardening, but later on he clarified the benefits and significance of gardening.
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The author actually loves gardening and planting very much, so the author uses a writing technique of suppression and irony in the article. He first describes planting vegetables as a natural act of self deception by humans, but gradually explains the meaning and benefits of planting vegetables in the following text. At the same time, the author compares taking care of crops to taking care of children, reflecting the author's responsibility and dedication to crop cultivation. In the article, the author vividly depicts the beautiful scenery of the vegetable garden multiple times, but also intersperses some displeasure towards planting, intuitively expressing the author's complex emotions towards planting.
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After learning this article, I think it's worth reading. At first, the author said that he didn't like planting, but as I gradually read it, I realized that he actually likes planting, and I can discover this mystery from the end.
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I like this essay very much！! ！This was my first exposure to foreign prose.I like reading proses very much since junior high school,and I am wild about writing some essays at my free time.I think this prose is very poetic and vivid .At first,the title of this article is very poetic. In the first paragraph,through the author used irony "I don't particularly like vegetables .i'd rather much rather eat something juicy and fat .like hot dogs." to express his dislike to gardening ,in the sixth paragraph,he also wrote the attractions of gardening.I think it may be called fall-rise pattern in chinses .It is an embellishment.In the article,my favorite sentence is"In some pocket of the mind there may even be a tendency to change this vision into a personal reassurance that all this healthy growth, this orderliness and thrusting life must somehow reflect movements in one's own spirit. " I think he took gardening to a spiritual level,it made the article has been sublimated.
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Yes，I like this article.《The Rite of Spring》is a very interesting and enlightening article. With vivid words and unique perspective, the author deeply explores the theme of spring ceremony, making the readers feel the beauty of spring and the power of life.
The author's literary grace is excellent. For example, when describing the scene of spring, the author uses rich vocabulary and vivid description, so that the reader seems to be in the atmosphere of spring. In addition, the author also uses some vivid metaphors and personification techniques to make the article more vivid.
Overall, this article is a very excellent piece of work and worth reading. It not only makes us feel the beauty of spring, but also makes us think about the meaning and value of life. -
I like this article very much. Clearly said in the beginning that he does not like gardening, but according to the subsequent reading, I found that the author is actually very fond of gardening, such a way of writing, which makes me very interested. Moreover, the author also uses various rhetorical devices to describe the beauty of spring and nature, expressing his love and longing for life.
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I like this article. This article gives me a sense of peace and tranquility as a whole. The author shared his feelings with us, writing about how he went from not understanding why he had to plant vegetables at the beginning, to buying vegetables that were not too different and convenient, to seeing the emptiness of the empty field without planting vegetables. The author felt the joy of growing vegetables and enjoyed the beauty of nature during the process. The entire article has a delicate writing style, which allows one to feel the author's delicate experience of life. At the same time, it arouses readers' interest in exploring the fields and raises the question of "Is growing vegetables really so magical?" I really want to personally experience and explore. I like the feeling this article brings me, as well as the fields and words written by the author.
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The author uses many rhetorical devices in this article, such as exaggeration, metaphor and so on.
For example, in paragraph 6, the word “neurotic” is usually used in a negative sense. The author, for humorous effect, keeps using such words and expressions to hide his intense interest and full appreciation of the significance of gardening.
And the sentence ,“In some cases, as with beans and cucumbers, ……strangle you in their vines. ”The author here is describing how the beans and cucumbers can grow in massive mumber and code de him suddenly as if to tale him in their wines.he word numerous beans and cucumbers are like naughty and playful children, struggling to embrace him at the same time, making him almost hard to breathe.
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