The following responses are excellent examples for this topic:

• For question 1, these students show their unique opinions with abundant information and adequate details. They have mentioned different orders:

（1）杨嘻嘻：Spatial order: Describe from top to bottom, inside out, or left to right. Chronological order: Describe the place's history or changes over time. Thematic order: Group details by themes or categories. Sensory details: Describe what you see, hear, smell, touch, taste.

（2）杨芊芊

1. Sensational Details: Engage the reader’s senses by describing what they can see, hear, smell, touch, and even taste. This helps to create a vivid and immersive experience.

2. Spatial Organization: Describe the place in a way that reflects how one would experience it spatially. Start with a broad overview and then move into specifics, or vice versa, depending on the narrative flow.

3. Chronological Order: If the place changes over time, describe it in a chronological sequence to show its evolution or the different experiences it offers at various times of the day or year.

4. Thematic Approach: Group details around themes or categories, such as natural features, architectural elements, cultural significance, or historical context.

5. Character Perspectives: If the place is part of a story, use characters’ perspectives to describe the place. Different characters may perceive the same place differently, adding depth to the description.

• Some of the students also point out that author can organize the detail from the whole to part:

（1）赵倩：When describing a place, the author can organize details as follows: start with an overall impression. Then describe location and surroundings. Next, focus on specific features like landmarks or unique architecture. Finally, mention the atmosphere or personal feelings.

（2）刘弈瑶：First, give an overall impression; then describe its location and surrounding environment; next, focus on specific features like landmarks or unique architecture; finally, mention the atmosphere and people's activities.

（3）李秋瑶：The author can organize the following details: where is this place, what unique scenery can leave a deep impression on people, why do people like this place, and what artistic conception can be created by this place.

• For question 2, several students show their opinions of the most impressing item. By using distinct adjectives and adverbs, they depict the item in a vivid and detailed way.

（1）邱冉冉：Its woodwork was adorned with roses painted on a red background and its seat was made of scarlet, morocco leather, decorated with a silk fringe and studded with an abundance of gold nails.

Describe in detail from the composition of the chair.

（2）柳雯晞：What impressed me the most about this room was that there was only one chair.There was only one thing of all, and the rooms were gorgeously decorated and laid out with all kinds of school supplies.

• For question 3, the most popular place is library. Many student gave a detailed description of library: some of them emphasize the appearance and atmosphere of library by using rhetorical device like simile.

（1）杨馨怡：The school library is a haven of knowledge. It's filled with row upon row of bookshelves, housing various books. The large reading area has comfortable desks and chairs. Big windows let in ample natural light. The atmosphere is quiet and serene, perfect for students to study and explore the wonderful world within the books. It's a place that nurtures our minds.

（2）李梓溪：The learning space in a university is a vibrant and diverse hub that fosters intellectual growth and creativity. It encompasses sprawling libraries filled with countless books and digital resources, where students can delve into research or find quiet corners to study. Modern classrooms equipped with advanced technology provide interactive learning environments, encouraging active participation and collaboration. The university also boasts comfortable lounges and discussion areas, adorned with comfortable seating and natural lighting, ideal for spontaneous group studies or casual academic debates.

（3）陈璐：The campus library is a spacious and quiet place filled with rows of bookshelves. Soft lighting creates a cozy atmosphere,Students can find comfortable seating areas to immerse themselves in their studies,The library also offers computer workstations for research, It is a place where ideas are exchanged and learning thrives,

（4）罗鑫淼：The school library is a palace of knowledge. The spacious and bright space, and the neatly arranged bookshelves seem to be waiting for students to explore. Sunlight spills through the windows onto the desks, quiet and warm. Here, one can smell the faint fragrance of books and hear the rustling sound of pages being turned. It is a haven for the soul, allowing us to roam freely in the ocean of knowledge, absorb the nutrients of wisdom, and keep growing.

（5）李如意：The library my campus is a must- see place. When stepping into the gate ,there are three machines for checking your identity. Then ,climb the stairs and choose a seat for you to read veieties of books or study. Hearing the sound of turning pages, you can concentrate yourself to study. I bet you will love it.

（6）王岩：The library on our campus is a peaceful haven.It has large windows that let in plenty of natural light. The shelves are filled with a wide range of books, from classic literature to modern science. There are comfortable chairs and tables where students can sit and study quietly. The librarians are always friendly and helpful, ready to assist us in finding the resources we need. It is a place where knowledge and inspiration abound.

（7）irhhGRvz：The school library is a quiet sanctuary, it has five floors, each floor is different, let people have a strong desire to learn. I like its books, its tables, its lights. I think it's a wonderful place to be, to be there for you when you need it, to be there for you during your down times, to be a silent friend

（8）王宫美：Our school's library is very big and bright.It is a comprehensive library.When you come in the library,you can find it is so quiet.In the library,we can borrow different kinds of books to read and learn by yourself. Some chairs in our school library are very comfortable.I like it very much. Every day there are many people go into the library to learn and study.In my opinion,it is a good place to study.I like to read stories,so I often borrow story books from the library. Every time we can keep the book for a week,and I always acquire some important knowledge.

（9）姚嘉韵/柠宁：The library is a vibrant marketplace where knowledge, ideas and stories collide freely. It is the garden of wisdom, and every book is a blooming flower that provides rich nectar for the bees of thought. At the same time, it is also the narrator of history, through the medium of books, to our world. They tell the stories and characters of the past so that we can better understand the place.

（10）fzTNdW6L：The university library stands as a majestic fortress of knowledge, nestled in the heart of the campus. Its grand facade, adorned with ivy, whispers of centuries of learning, while the towering columns seem to hold up the very sky. Inside, the hushed atmosphere is a stark contrast to the bustling campus life outside. Rows of bookshelves stretch into the distance, their shelves laden with volumes that hold the wisdom of the ages. The scent of old books mingles with the fresh aroma of coffee from the small café tucked in the corner, creating a unique olfactory symphony. Students huddle over textbooks, laptops, and steaming cups of coffee, engrossed in their studies or deep in thought. This sanctuary of silence is a beacon for the intellectually curious, a place where ideas are born and knowledge is shared. It’s not just a building; it’s the soul of the campus, a living testament to the pursuit of truth and understanding.

（11）赵婉竹：Libraries are gateways to knowledge everywhere, providing the basic conditions for lifelong learning, independent decision-making and cultural development of individuals and social groups. The library does not lie in the size of the area, but in the number of books, the atmosphere is good or bad, if you understand it in all aspects, approach it, you will fall in love with it!

（12）江朋阳：The campus library is a haven of knowledge. Its exterior is elegant and imposing. Inside, it is filled with rows of neatly arranged bookshelves. Soft lighting creates a warm and inviting atmosphere. Students can be found quietly reading or studying at the tables. The library offers a wide variety of books, from classic literature to modern scientific research. It is a place where dreams are nurtured and minds are expanded.

• Other students highlight the function of different places with a clear logic, mainly focusing on how do they contribute to students' study and life:

（1）anfjYyBy：The campus library is a vital hub of learning and collaboration, designed to foster a sense of community among students and faculty. Its modern architecture features spacious study areas, abundant natural light, and comfortable seating arrangements, creating an inviting atmosphere. Inside, a vast collection of books, journals, and digital resources caters to diverse academic needs, spanning various disciplines. Private study rooms are available for group work or quiet reflection, while technology-rich spaces facilitate research and multimedia projects. The library also hosts regular workshops and events, enhancing students' research skills and encouraging intellectual exploration. Knowledgeable librarians are readily available to assist with information queries, offering guidance on navigating resources and citation practices. With its seamless blend of traditional and digital formats, the library stands as a cornerstone of academic success, promoting exploration, innovation, and a lifelong love of learning.

（12）张蕊/初安：The school is full of various unique and important places, each playing a crucial role in the overall learning and development of students. The classroom is the primary place where students receive instruction, engage in discussions, and complete their assignments. The library is a hub for independent learning, research, and accessing resources for academic growth. The cafeteria is not just a place to eat, but also serves as a socia l gathering spot where students can relax and recharge during breaks. The playground and sports field are essential for physical education and outdoor activities, allowing students to exercise, socialize, and develop their motor skills. The administrative office is where important administrative tasks are carried out, and students receive support and guidance when needed. Lastly, the science laboratory and computer lab are specialized spaces that provide hands-on experience and access to technology, enhancing the practical application of theoretical knowledge. Each of these places contributes to the holistic development and well-being of students within the school environment.

• A few students also mentioned other places in the campus, such as the natural scenery of lake and the function of milk tea shop. They have described these places from various aspects, which leaves reader a deep impression.

（15）zusjdu：The lake on campus is serene haven.Surrounded by lush greenery, it reflects the claer blue sky and the surrounding buildings.Ducks swim gracefully adding life to scene,cats chase each other bringing happiness to life.Benches by the lake offer a peaceful spot for students to relax.This is a beautiful place,a relaxing place.

（16）刘嘉丽：Our school has many milk tea shops, which sell many types of milk tea and coffee, students on our campus every day to buy a cup, very famous, and the taste of milk tea is very mellow ,sweet, make people happy