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2301班Unit 1-unit 8优秀例子展示

By 2301班助教刘璐 06-29 75次浏览

Unit 1

Q1.  How would you apply personification to describing plants? Try to find a Chinese poem using personification on a plant.

  If I want to describe plants through personification, I think emotion is the most important aspect. Emotion is a special characteristic that between human beings and other creatures.

  For example, If I want to describe a bunch of lilies on my table, I would write: On the table where I usually rest, a bunch of lilies perform their beauty and grace. Their white dresses are decorated with a yellowish circle. As they dance in the wind, joy and cheer are translated to me through their fragrant perfumes.

  In the Chinese poem Written in a Village South of the Capital by Cui Hu, “人面不知何处去,桃花依旧笑春风” the author describes peach blossoms that are still smiling in the breeze. The author’s description of the peach blossom smiling is an example of personification.

这位同学对于问题的理解很好,不仅指出了一个拟人手法使用很显著的例子并且对其进行了各个层次的理解,并且也会将诗人的想法和感情也表达了出来,很不错的回答!

 

Unit 2

Banana has a smooth, slightly bumpy texture on the outside. When ripe, it has a bit of give when squeezed, indicating it's ready to eat. It has a long, curved shape with a yellowish-green color. At the bottom, it tapers off into a small stem.If you hold it close to your ear, you can sometimes hear a slight rattle, which is the seeds moving around inside. It has a sweet, tropical aroma that can be quite intoxicating. Some describe it as having a hint of musk. Initially, it has a mild, sweet taste. As you chew, there's a slight tanginess that balances the sweetness, and it's easy to peel.

这位同学在描述香蕉的时候是从各个方面来描述的,形状,颜色,质地以及口感和香味,这是很好的一种描述方式,是很不错的回答!

 

Unit 3

This person has a tall and slender figure, with an elegant and refined appearance. They have dark, sleek hair that falls to their shoulders, and their eyes are bright and sharp, reflecting a wise and thoughtful nature.

In terms of personality, this individual is known for their intelligence, humility, and strong sense of duty. They are respectful and compassionate, always prioritizing the well-being of others over their own. Their wit and quick thinking have earned them the respect and admiration of many.

Throughout their life, this person has faced many challenges and obstacles, but they have always persevered with grace and determination. They are a firm believer in the power of education and have dedicated themselves to learning and improving their skills. Their hard work and dedication have led them to become a highly accomplished individual in their field.

Despite their success, they remain humble and approachable, always willing to help and mentor those around them. They are well-loved and respected for their integrity and moral values, and they have made a significant impact on society with their contributions.

这位同学的评论很详细的描述了一个人,从一开始的容貌上,外表上的描述到这个人的个性,个性是如何的,如何与众不同的,有一些别人没有的强烈的责任感,不服输,谦逊,因此这个人的一个形象已经立了起来,让人感到非常舒服一种描述的方式!

Unit 4

The library stands majestically at the center of the campus, its grand facade exuding a sense of knowledge and wisdom. As you approach, you're greeted by a columned entrance, adorned with intricate carvings that reflect the university's rich history. The doors open into a vast, domed hall, where sunlight filters in through the high windows, illuminating the space.

The interior is a symphony of harmony, with rows of towering bookshelves filled with volumes of every shape and color. The air is thick with the scent of aged paper and leather, a reminder of the countless stories and secrets contained within these walls. Students cozy up in nooks and crannies, engrossed in their studies, their heads bowed over textbooks and laptops.

The library boasts multiple levels, each with its own unique ambiance. The quiet hum of conversation echoes in the stacks, a testament to the collaborative spirit of the institution. Comfortable seating areas invite rest and reflection, while state-of-the-art computer labs and quiet study rooms cater to a variety of academic needs.

作者详细全面的描述了图书馆的外貌和内里,顺序是从整体来看图书馆是怎样的,图书馆的每一层是如何构成的,并且每一层里都有什么,很详细很全面,让人瞬间脑海里浮现出你所描述的图书馆的整体面貌!很好的回答!

Unit 5

Q3. Do you think “Charles” is a story for children? If not, what would be the theme of this story? 

I don't think “Charles” is a story for children. Because the story is so imaginative and complicated that children can't understand by themselves. I think the theme of the story is to appealing children's image is colorful. Their are round person. And parents should pay more attention to their kids. The kids not just "kids" at home, they all have their friends, their mind, their ideas and other positions. So we should prepare to find their changes when they grow up.

作者首先表达了自己的观点,认为查尔斯这本书不适合给孩子们讲解,而后又清楚的列举了自己的原因,指出这本书晦涩难懂,小孩子们难以理解,并且也会对小孩子们的思想产生一定的影响。是一个很不错的回答!

 

Unit 6

I think this can be achieved in various ways, but a common method is through the use of a specific sensory stimulus that is associated with the past memory.

Here's an example:

Stimulus Used: A song or piece of music that was played during a significant event in the past.

Trigger Event: Listening to the song can serve as a trigger to recall the past experience. The melody, lyrics, or emotional association with the song can activate the memory and bring back feelings, images, and details of the past event.

These presents a similar sensory stimulus, in this case, the music, it can trigger the retrieval of the associated memory. 

作者首先指明了可以使用感官刺激的办法,并且举例说明了自己的看法,发生一件重要的事情时恰好听到一首歌,这样的话以后每次听到这首歌都会想起这件事,这个我也有感触,是一个很不错的回答!

Unit 7

Q1. Do you think Harry Potter is a flat character or a round character? Explain. 

  A "round character" in literary terms refers to a character with complex and multifaceted personality traits; their actions and motivations can evolve and change as the story progresses.

  I think Harry Potter is a round character. Here are some reasons why Harry Potter is considered a round character:

Firstly,  He is the lead of the story. The author spend a amount of words to narrater his Growth and Change. Harry undergoes significant growth throughout the series. Starting as a young boy with no knowledge of the magical world, he matures into a responsible young wizard. His journey is filled with challenges and changes that reflect his round character.

 Secondly, Harry Potter is not a one-dimensional character. He is brave, intelligent, and loyal, but he also experiences fear, doubt, and vulnerability. His character encompasses elements of both light and darkness, making him more realistic and engaging.

  Thirdly, Harry experiences love and loss, friendship and betrayal, success and failure. These emotional experiences add depth to his character, making him more three-dimensional.

  Finally, Harry faces numerous moral dilemmas throughout the story, where he must make choices between justice and loyalty. These dilemmas showcase his moral growth and the complexity of his character.

作者展示了自己对哈利波特这个人物形象的多方面的了解,首先作者认为哈利波特是主角并且一直在描述他的成长生活历程,所以哈利波特这个人物形象应该是一个round character,同时哈利波特也跟周围的人有情感的牵绊,所以这个人物形象就丰富了起来。

Unit 8

Q1. Please give one example about story setting. Remember to indicate the source. One classic example of story setting can be found in the novel "Pride and Prejudice" by Jane Austen. The story is set in the rural county of Hertfordshire, England, in the early 19th century. The setting is crucial to the story as it provides the backdrop for the social dynamics and interactions that drive the plot.
  Here's a passage that illustrates the setting:
  "It is a truth universally acknowledged, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife. However little known the feelings or views of such a man may be on his first entering a neighborhood, this truth is so well fixed in the minds of the surrounding families, that he is considered the rightful property of some one or other of their daughters.

This provides the social background of the story, setting the tone for love and romance throughout, and also lays the foundation for the protagonist's identity.

作者的回答非常详细具体,首先借助名著《傲慢与偏见》中的一个场景的描述,并且还将原文中的描述写了出来,可见作者对这个问题有很深刻的理解,也在后面解释了这个背景描述的含义是什么,是很好的表达!

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